by Corruption Aug 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Halfway through, |
by Aubrey
Well written. |
by damont
.... this poem is nice i don't have a ? though. well written |
by Sydney
Ahhh. There goes that ending of yours = D Still really good. |
Hmmm a bit of foreshadowing at the end..pretty good..i like the whole story poem. |
by nikki
It was a beautifully written piece. it was very powerful and had a lot of emotions behind it. it was a lovely poem to read. nice work 5/5 |