Comments : Stars Crashing To The Ground

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    You are amazing, why you aren`t published is way beyond me...or perhaps you are and I`m just not aware of it yet? Lol. The imagery in this piece, as always, was amazing..along with the wording...the flow never once fell off course, how you do it, I dunno lol.

    "Oh this night of nights I weep
    Void of love and lack of sleep
    Inside my heart a yearning fair
    Lent to the mask of Soul's despair."

    ^^ LOVED those lines, such a great way to begin a powerful poem...and kudos to keeping the power going throughout the whole piece Dear.

    5.5
    :]