We welcome you for bringing new poems. Let your words spread lots of smile like blooming flowers of this site. Keep up your excellent work. Best of luck.

Nazeer

Thank you

Wow. really really liked it!!! really good imagery and i loved the rhyme and rhythm. really well done. one suggestion though. separate the rhymes with comma's, and maybe break up the stanza's a bit. it would really help the reading of it. turn a great peom into a fantastic poem. also, i think at the end of the poem, you mean 'mad' pill instead of 'made' pill, and 'through' instead of 'thought'. hope that's ok... did i mention i really really loved the poem!?!