Comments : His defeat

  • 17 years ago

    by cassanova

    I love it its different coming from you

  • 17 years ago

    by Windsong

    I know the pain but i was 9 && the 2 guys were not my boyfriends and they were just friends
    and i find it funny when people say kids that age dont know any thing i think i just proved everyone wrong
    just some adive to you
    keep your head up and never look down
    thats what will mess you up even more
    believe me i have down it time after time
    and it dosent get better
    so ya , just keep your head up and look to your futer not the past

  • 17 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Wow this was a great poem...you have great skills never doubt that.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mohsin Armaan

    Hay this is such a nice work of yours
    i know it feels but forget every thing because now i am with you!

    take care

    ~Keep Glowin~