Tis a cool style, never heard of this one, must try it, lol, this tis a great poem jenna, you always did have a way of creating stories into great poems, i give it a perfect 5/5 as always!!!! keep them coming!!!

I almost passed up the chance to read this, but once I finished I was just shocked! Jenna, this was an exceptional piece; one of my favorites! You have such a talent for writing and this one definately shows that. You used this form beautifuly. I doesn't seem like you were restricted to a form, more like the form fit you. ((If you understood that I shall give you a cookie ;] )
Really great job love!!
5.5

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I loved it. it was a very unique piece of work.
I like different pieces of poetry and this was definitely the most different I have ever read in my life. & i should know ive been writing/reading/listening to poetry since i was born.(& i still suck @ writing poetry!!! lol)
I give you 5/5. u rock.
Im adding you to my faves this poem too.

Ah, this was wonderful. It's an interesting style, which I've made a mental note to try one day. It was perfect, though. I could picture everything in my head.

I felt that this line:
"But judging by your staggering stability," messed with the flow a [tiny] little bit, but apart from that, your poem was flawless.

Great job.

Don't even know what to say.
Best poem I've read on here;
You're style is utterly flawless.

Nice writing, 5/5 from me!!!