This poem is amazingly good..
the flow almost makes my heart skip a beat...
it's really a sweet poem...
keep going
*isabel*

Wow, the form of this poem is so nice. I like it. Definently the two line where it writes:
"one smile
wiping hesitations all away"
to me that's so beautiful. I give this a 5/5!!

Excellent and a very unique poem with a real descrete style and great word choice. Keep it up

Tc
fsams

Good poem ^_^