Comments : A Dream About You And I(its long, but worth the read)

  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    It sure is worth reading...
    it's sweet and emotional and it makes the reader feel like being actually in it...
    don't know if you know what i mean...
    i only have one suggestion, though...
    you could divide it in several stanzas...to make it easier to read...
    but that's your choice...
    it's a good poem, either ways...it flows really well...
    =)
    *isabel*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    It's so touching. I love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by IcAnMaKeIt

    YOUVE DONT IT AGAIN!!!!!