by lish Aug 27, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
My name is Hakim Jamil |
by unknown
Wonderful piece.. The emotion very strong and powerful. It's one of the best story about life i've ever read.. It flowed very well too.. And three last stanzas,, it was a great ending for your poem.. |
Wow, great story. I can really relate to it!!! |
by azii
I'M TOTALLY SPEECHLESS THIS POEM IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVEIT!!!!! SO MEANINGFULL AND .. JUST GREAT!!! IT'S ON MY FAVS AND YOUR ONM MY FAVS I REALLY ENJOY READING YOU RWORK CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Hhmmm. did you write this all yourself. or were those words from someone else (the stuff about jamil)? i really liked this. |
by Spirit
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