Omg! This is like the perfect poems ever! I love it soo much! Keep on writing because that was lovely! Good Job!! I loved it!! It ment alot to me! Thats how i feel for my guy!! I miss him so much!!! It was awsome!

excellent poem, pink. keep up the good work.

hi.. I know how you feel and you express it really good in words! keep on writing.. you're good... =)

I gave you a 5

please check out my poems and comment and rate..
It would mean a lot to me =)

hugs to you

I loved the last line, it was very interesting, good job!