I like this piece. The worda are so nicely
put. I enjoyed the moment I spent reading it. :) Thank You for commenting my poem. This piece deserves a 5/5!!

Good poem, you hav ethe potential to make your poems very well, just work on them a bit. :)

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Wonderful poem!!!!!!! I coudn't stop reading, and even if your english is a little fuzzy, you did a wonderful job picking the right words! im really impressed! I love the way you wrote this, and im sure plenty of people can relate * i know i can* wonderful work again! keep it up!!!!!!! :D