Wish someone would change her life..

by Wake   Aug 27, 2007


As she walks into the room
they look in awe to realize her face.
All the glitter on the flawless skin,
the room is suddenly her stage.
..All the mascara in her eyes
..to shut the misery from everyone's gaze
..Feeling numb to the world
..fallen far from grace.

Every night she sleeps awake
with teardrops in her eyes
sometimes i end up thinking if this all she wished for,
a life in fake disguise..?
..The locks that run deep from her head
..slowly curling into air to make way
..for emptiness to slowly reach in
..and take control of the rest of her day.

As goes through every hour in dismay
from the corner of my eyes i see her cry
and she knows that i know
still she keeps hiding inside..
..And stares into the window.
..A stairway to another life?
..Staring into nothingness
..I wonder what goes on in her mind.

I try to stay calm
as she leaves everyday in vanity
and just wish for someone to change her life
'cuz she wont confide in me...

Tomorrow's another sun
another day gemmed in darkness will linger.
she'll wear it proud as she drifts farther away from me
Just another ring on her finger.

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Written by Wake

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    Wow that's really good..
    it shows your emotions in it good job

    Aveena-*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    A M A Z I N G ! just amazing. like... omg wow. your have a great talent. that was... wow. 5/5 all the way!! ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by Katelyn

    U no wat, i just dont get u wake, ur poems r so deep and thought out and its like idk, its like i wish maybe somehow u could get these poems further out there so that they can get 2 more ppl. ur able 2 capture so much thru so many of your poems and it's all from pure talent. you need 2 use it n life... let poetry take u somewhere, plz.

    Yet again, another piece nowhere short of great! keep it up!

    .:Katelyn:.

  • 17 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    OMG i luv this poem its amazing and some of the lines seem so much like me.
    u show great emotion and i luv the way you wrote it, keep up the good work

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Janessa

    I really liked this 1...keep it up