Flawlessly Penned.

This poem brought tear's too my eyes, The thunderstorm was very effective. It deepend the emotion's, made the pain sharper, and the tear's swifter.
The emotions ran deep, and you could feel the pain seep of every word.

This poem really effected me,
Keep it up, you and amazing writter,
Elaine. 5/5

P.S If you wouldn't mind could you check out one of my poem's. I would really like to know what you think. Thanks.