Melting embrace

by Finalgravedigger   Aug 27, 2007


Melting embrace

You hold me tight
with such warm embrace
I feel so light
my heart race.

It was so hot
like magma rock
melting me away
with feelings left to stray.

Now Im like ice
cold and in fright
Tired of only lonely nights.

I walk in dead snow
left all alone
Im surrounded by cold stones.

You make me cry tears
Im left with fears
I just wish you were near.

Sunny days are gone
its been so long
but now in deep rest
just remember I tried my best

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very touching and beautifully written, the emotions in it are superbly expressed. You created unique and wonderful atmosphere.
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    WOW!!
    I really like it. The descriptions are great.

  • 17 years ago

    by Isabelle

    Oh, I love this one! Sorry, but I feel the exact same way. Your words just seem to say everything that my words can't say. That just rocks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Truly heartfelt.. beautifully penned.. this piece of yours actually spoke ..and the feeling it created.. amazing.

    "..Sunny days are gone
    its been so long
    but now in deep rest
    just remember I tried my best.."

    i really like this one..

    love your work.

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    A very nice written poem full of emotions......i love this.....

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