Lonely December

by sara   Aug 27, 2007


You came to me in my life's winter,
A warm wind
To melt the snows of my pain.
I welcomed the warmth,
But my December heart
Drove you away from me.

Again I grew cold,
Again you came
Again my wintry heart
It drove you away.

But this time it kept the Warmth.

And gradually the winter passed
Until when you came next
In my heart summer was in bloom.

But my heart would not let it go -
A more fuller, brighter summer it yearned for;
Until my summer heart
It drove you away.

And now you are gone
And the summer with you,
And a cold wind now blows,
And it bears on it only pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    U are creative with words........

    thats sad.......
    wow.....
    gd work.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    This was really cleverly written.
    I loved the way you described the heart as having diff seasons.
    It's was fabulously written
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by tara

    Really great poem loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow.. it sent a chill thru me .. a very poignant and passionate write.. i loved the way ou described it.. a marvelous start to it and so was the end. its a complete poem..
    i think this one is really the best i've read so far !

    you have written an amazing piece..purely art..
    i still cant believe how it made me feel .. and reading it again n again js makes me realize.

    a great piece this.(my fav.)

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Metaphors are excellent and flow of this poem is great. Very original and emotional piece. I like it very much, it has good atmosphere. 5/5

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