by Angie
Nat, this is simply beautiful and heartfelt. Yes, he is with you all the time.... this write is also very inspiring to others who may be experiencing the same as you.... |
by Nix
Great and very positive message! You wrote this poem excellently and created good atmosphere. Flow is fantastic and you described emotions superbly. 5/5 |
by OHgreenman
Very beautiful and peaceful write...I really enjoyed this stanza: |
Excellent write ,wonderfully written and wording was simple yet powerful, you bring happiness to me in this poem, a pleasure to read and I myself call upon him each and everyday to sent me comfort to ease my pains, yet you did a marvelous job, keep it up please, your friend Tracy d......5/5 |
by Lisa
Amazing poetry |