I really liked this one and your good at making the emotions flow through the words which is the #1 thing I always look for =) I understand this poem a little to well sadly and I'm sorry if you actually had to go through it =P Two things though in the 14th line you need to capitalize the first "I" like you did in all the others and fix "tha" to "the" lols Other then that I loved it all certainly want to read more =) 5/5
Rhea

Very nice. I liked the emotion that i felt when i read this. Dont stop writing!
-Stephanie