by Lonely Little Dreamer Aug 27, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Little porcelain doll, |
Wow that was breathtaking.. it had a beauty that was almost haunting. It seems to me like an angel who is having a nightmare about the way that the earth is turned out with all of the hate. It also seems to me that in the end the angel dies before it is able to save the world from what it has become, and that depresses the angel. I can really relate to this poem because everyone knows what it feels like to moun something that you have no power over stoping. Nice job, especially for such a short poem. |
Wow very deep, and i loved the flow, keep it up 5/5 |
by Melpomene
This was great, I loved how you made the doll hold human qualitys really good use of personification. You have an interesting imagination which you put into poems and create such wonderful pieces. The emotional sadness which I felt coming from this was deep and powerful I couldn't shake it at all. Started great ended great. ~Mel |
by GoodMEMORIES
I think that how you related a porcelin doll to a little girl was done very well. I LOVED THE METAPHOR... the flow was amazing |
by Kyle
This poem was soo real and it amazed more as i read. good job and you are an awesome writer. good job |