Perfect life

by judith redmount   Aug 27, 2007


I am searching for letters
To make a new word
Combine the words
to make a new sentence
Write sentences in one
To form a paragraph
Attach paragraphs
To to get a page
To put page by page
To write a good book
To gather goods books
To live a perfect life

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  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Im satisfied..and no words to say..
    5 for it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Now this was written with so much truth. The order in a way to get a book done and to be famous or have a 'Perfect Life'. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Overall a good poem, flowing well and penned well. There is still room for improvement as you know and you have the capability to make it better.

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    This is a really well written poem short but well written well done
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    Great flow, I really like this one. I like reading poems with an original topic, it's refreshing. You have a nice theory, I also tried to write a poem about writing, it turned out to have a much darker tone than this. 5/5 from me.

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