Hahaha! i really like it!! short and sweet and easy to read! really nice. live is like a seiries of events in a book, and it blends into a saga. never really thought about it... but this poem discribes it well!

This piece is very original, short, and sweet.
I find it amazing how some forms of art require very little to scream out boldly so much.

I wish you the best of luck putting it all together. Though they say there is no such thing as a "perfect life", there is always the "perfect book" that reminds us how dull it would be if life was "perfect".

If you ever get all your pages filled give me a shout so I can read and dream with you

---Sher

This is another well written poem from you.... i've never really thought of living a perfect life as you described it...

nice job. 5/5

Great flow, I really like this one. I like reading poems with an original topic, it's refreshing. You have a nice theory, I also tried to write a poem about writing, it turned out to have a much darker tone than this. 5/5 from me.

This is a really well written poem short but well written well done
xx

Overall a good poem, flowing well and penned well. There is still room for improvement as you know and you have the capability to make it better.

Tc
Fsams

Now this was written with so much truth. The order in a way to get a book done and to be famous or have a 'Perfect Life'. 5/5

Im satisfied..and no words to say..
5 for it!!