Comments : Not the Moon Not the Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    I have heard this one before from you. It was a really nice piece. It was sad and well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost and Alone

    This is a good poem and I like it but it's a bit hard to understand the focus unless you really pay attention to it so besides that great 4/5
    -Previously Thorn
    Skittlz