Judith,

I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poetry. You have brough a fresh mind to the site and open so many other hearts, souls, and minds with your talent.

The fourth stanza:

Words can not break
nor punish my mind
here, now and after
not before nor behind

is my favorite. I feel as though it speaks, no not speaks, screams out to me. Saying here, now... not yesterday nor tomorrow, but today.

It gives me a clearer picture of the present and how important this very moment is.

Yet, on the other hand you have not closed any minds. You write elegantly; yet you allow enough room for the reader to draw in their own meaning from the keys that you stroked to form such a heart warming piece.

--Sher

I really enjoyed the wording of this, nice work, 5/5

What a beautifully written poem, i love the feeling and emotion in it
xx

This poem is a really greta poem, trhe subject is great and the wording is excellent
xx

Great poem with great consecutive rhymes. I loved the way it flows and is greatly strung throughout. Keep it up 5/5

Tc
Fsams

Wow, I really enjoyed this one. It has a sense of optimism and strength about it.

This verse was beautiful

'Words can not break
nor punish my mind
here, now and after
not before nor behind'

5/5 =)