Awww. hold on, alright.

one little thing though: Felt is the pain of an empty heart. that line sounds off or something...felt is the pain???

5 anyway, for the emotion. i cant figure out who/what id rather hug now. you or your poem. im sorry if that sounds odd to you. but sometimes people write poems that make an impact on me because im moved by it, and i just want to pick up their poem and hug it! =]

im insane i know. =]

Very nice poem, its very beautiful.

i myself am actually losing hope on a girl who was the inspiration for all my poems...

well, good luck,

hunter