Eighteen.

by Sam Azam   Aug 28, 2007


Well yes I'm a bit directionless
And yes maybe my actions seem senseless
I know you're feeling helpless
And it's making me restless
But I'm a little more careless
And although I'm living faithless
At my age, this is how I live best.

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  • 17 years ago

    by judith redmount

    Apart from the last sentence, the rhyme is perfect. The flow is good.
    It is short poem.
    Hope the direction is clear now. Nice work

  • 17 years ago

    by judith redmount

    Short, but interesting

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