Wow, i really like this poem. you got it going on. lol... keep it up, your good

Hey great poem..great emotions..i like your rhyme and your structure ...i like the words..it makes good sense..i think a lot can relate to what your poem has to say and thats good
-alicia

I love how i can feel your pain in this poem. there is nothing greater than to read a poem where you can actually feel the emotions yourself and get an idea on how the author feels. very nicely done