My feelings

by Kasie   Aug 28, 2007


I built a wall around my heart,
So no one could get through.
Then it all came crashing down,
The day that I met you.

I just thought that you should know,
That your the one I belong to.
And my love kept growing,
Since the day that I met you.

I love you more than anything,
And theres nothing you can do.
To change the way I feel,
And the fact that I Love You.

You mean so much to me,
More than words could ever say.
I loved you ever since,
That very special day.

As the world sat on my shoulders,
I sat and took the weight.
And then you came along,
And took away the hate.

Even though I've never stared,
Straight into your eyes.
I know that I love you,
And believe me this is no lie.

I have never felt this way before,
Until you came along.
I love you more and more each day,
Nothing can go wrong.

You see,These feelings that I have written,
Is only just the start.
The stronger feelings are held,
Deep within my heart.

Now as I end, This heartfelt poem,
Theres something you should know.
I love you with all my heart,
And I'm never going to let you go.

For the readers, Just so you know,
I hate to end this poem,
But I got to let you go.
I have to give it to my baby,
So he will also know.

�© copyright 2007 by Kasie C

~Dedicated to: Some one special you know who you are =P

~I tried my best, please vote and comment, And tell me if theres something that I should do that will make it sound better.~ Thanks for reading.

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  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    I like that you are willing to expose emotional words in your poetry, but for some reason this poem left me wanting more. I guess I take aim at literal poems, as the phrasing can be overused. It's a very sweet poem, but I feel as though i'm empathizing with the words of the poem, rather than feeling it? Does that make sense?

    "You mean so much to me,
    More than words could ever say."

    This line seems out of place as you seem to have plenty of words that tell of how you feel.

    I vote 4/5...still a sweet sonnet

  • 13 years ago

    by Georgia

    Your emotions were clear and it flowed perfectly. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by December

    So full of emotions,
    I like it.
    i kinda feel the same way.. *

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