Comments : My feelings

  • 17 years ago

    by December

    So full of emotions,
    I like it.
    i kinda feel the same way.. *

  • 13 years ago

    by Georgia

    Your emotions were clear and it flowed perfectly. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    I like that you are willing to expose emotional words in your poetry, but for some reason this poem left me wanting more. I guess I take aim at literal poems, as the phrasing can be overused. It's a very sweet poem, but I feel as though i'm empathizing with the words of the poem, rather than feeling it? Does that make sense?

    "You mean so much to me,
    More than words could ever say."

    This line seems out of place as you seem to have plenty of words that tell of how you feel.

    I vote 4/5...still a sweet sonnet