Amazing poem! I loved the way you broke up the stanzas. It was amazing...I doubt I could ever remove you from my favs list because you write such beautiful, heart-wrenching poetry. Loved this piece as I do so many of your others. :)
Charisma*

Better that we break the chains
that keep us hanging on
That hold us in a prison
where the hope of love is gone

^^^^
Jeannie have you brought tears to my eyes .... ya darn right you have.
Your words rip through my heart, leaving me breathless.

Amazing write Auntie ....
Much love
Luanne