by Sam Azam Aug 28, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
I have wet dreams and cocaine rise. |
by Alyssa Marie
I fell easily in the presence of this poem, lying there, almost. It was perfectly dictated in the words of guilty carelessness and just straight truth. You could have changed the last line's rhyme though =] Still, beautiful. 5/5 |
by lish
Wow this is a relaly powerfull poem, i love your wording and the rhyme is excellent 5/5 |
by Fsams
Overall a good poem 4/5. The rhymes are excellent I would say. You can improve a lot my dear :) |
by Stephanie
Wow. Lol. :P |
by Michelle18
Uhm wow...this is interesting.... some sexual stuff here lol...i like it 5/5 |