Can I?

"Here I am once again.
Broken and confused.
Misused and abused."

Such a heartbreaking ending.. but as always, you've penned an amazing piece
5/5
*Gem*

Very effective and emotional, with very good choice of words. I like the rhyme scheme in this one, you did great job with it. Whole poem is very powerful, and it holds a lot of sadness.

What a awesome piece you have penned. Very heartwrenching.

Can I hold on for long?
Can I be more strong?
No hope, No choice.
Can you hear my voice?

These lines really touched my heart. Isn't that all we all need a hand to help us stand and someone to hear us.
Excellent job on this poem.
Take Care Cindy

Wow I liked the sadness and sorrow all along the masterpiece
There are alot of questions unanswered that all of us ask

My fave lines are;

Can I play this game of life?
What to do? Die or survive?
Can I take This pain?
I'm about to go insane.

Keep writing,
Laura

This is really sad.