Nice job...the flow's a tad rough at spots, but I really enjoyed how you would pose a question and then an answer or a thought and then an answer in each stanza...that made it very understandable and really made a statement to the person it was for. I really enjoyed this whole piece. My favorite lines were...

You said you believed with all of your heart we could last
then how come this all belongs to the past ?

Great job!
Charisma*

I'm sorry.
me and my boyfriend are on the brink of breaking up.

Thats really good!
I can relate to it too!
Keep up the good work!

Gem
xx

p.s please comment some of my poems thanks (:

Aww...sweetie this was such a sad poem! i could really tell how much he is hurting you with whats hes doing...im sorry...BUT you did an UNBELIEVABLE job with the poem : ) 5/5<33

Ohh..Another amazing poem of yours, i loved this one, so full of rage and still with some hope.. -->"Prove me wrong"

"You made me believe you'd never break my heart
Still I'm left here searching for the missing part"
^^I loved this stanza!

Anyway, keep it up!5/5

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Verrry relatable. like its scary how much i can relate. excellent piece. return the favor?

Wow this poem is soo true. ive expereinced this, it sucks.

Wow
as i read this i thought of my boyfrined
and how he says all that stuff to me
and i just keep hoping my relationship diesnt end like that
bcuz my last one did and it hurt really bad
this poem is really relatable
and touching

Great work!

(spreek je later!)

Wow!! this is really good.. I am touched by this poem!!

xx Megan

Love It 5/5

Can Totally Relate x

The rhyme worked well. Two thumbs up for this one!!!

Sarah,
the poem is so clear.
You describe the things just the way I feel them. Every word of your poem is like a piece of my life.
I feel the same as you, but I can't say it like you do.

Suppah Baby!

This is really good! Especially like this :
You told me you still cared
then why is non of my heart spared? Keep it up:]

Its sad, but very very good
i can definatly relate
5/5
:)

Very good! kinda scares me though cuz my relashinship is like... as close to perfect as it could be... And your poem is exactally what im afraid of! Deffinatly an awsome poem! I love it!
Brandy

return the favor plz!!

I really like this one.
It's my favorite.
Your really good at this kind of stuff.
<3
i can toatlly relatee.

Thats amazing.
I love it
So much meaning.
And I feel It.

xx.