Betrayal , Rejection
Deceptive affections
Failed perceptions
of unwise suggestions.

Emotion dejection.
Distorted projection
The only connection
is the broken reflection

These two stanzas are phenominal... You make the words fit together like Heaven and God. Dont stop writing!
5/5
**Heather**

A-maz-ing!
Luv Luv Luved it.

And thanks mucho much for all ur comments you left me.

Wow, truly greatly written, with powerful imagery and superb wording. I think that you should capitalize I in the first stanza, that is the only mistake in the poem.
My favorite stanza is:
-Betrayal , Rejection
Deceptive affections
Failed perceptions
of unwise suggestions.-
Whole piece is very unique, too.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

Really good poem. 5/5

amandaxx. rawr! =]]

Great ending and whole poem is very original, you wrote it superbly. I like the topic, very touching piece. Every stanza is so powerful and emotional and wording is excellent!