Comments : Winter's Beauty {{acrostic}}

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by my favorite poet of P&q, again you have showed your wonderful talent through this wonderful poem.

    keep it up dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I have always love structured poetry and the acrostic is no different. I love the disciplin in general that is provides.

    You are an amazing and talentd young writer. You make poetry look elegant and makes one think that it can written with such ease.

    That is the sign of a true writer, creater, and artist.

    I love the wording and the flow you have used here... and there is something wonderful about the beauty of winter that makes one sparkle.

    ---Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Well done this poem is definately unique and awesome
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow.
    You have mastered the art of an acrostic. Simply fantastic. The imagery was amazing -- I kept picturing everything in my mind. The flow was great && the word usage was amazing. Magnificent job. :]] 5.5

    - Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Excellent descriptions! Very well done on this. Amazingly written and excellent word choice. I enjoyed reading this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Wonderful poem. I love acrostics!!!
    The imagery used was beautiful and painted a lovely picture in my head. I loved your word choice. This poem was so desciptive and the flow was excellent.

    Keep it up! 5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Wow! This is beautiful. Acrostics are hard to pull off in my opinion, and you did so with elegance and seeming ease. A wonderful write, with great word usage and imagery. Really made me want to be out in the snow! Bring on Winter!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N