A Year Has Past And So Have You.

by Lonesomeme   Aug 28, 2007


Whisper into my open ear.
I shall listen to only you,
If only I could keep you near,
Keep me closer to lonely you.

Upon broad shoulder is your fear,
Defending, as men boldly do,
I shall listen to only you.
Whisper into my open ear.

Make your intentions crystal clear,
For I shall follow only you.
My heart beats against lonely you,
If only for another year,
Whisper into my open ear.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    I love this poem a lot, because of
    how you write, but also because this
    poem reminds me of a recent loss I
    have experienced. I enjoyed, it a lot.
    I give this a 5/5!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Unique style. The 'only s' and 'lonely s' and 'you s' in the 1st stanza make it a little bouncy to read but also add a certain charm. it's a very sweet and sad peom.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    The sweet whispers that are told to us seem to enlighten the heart despite the fears.

    The part state "Upon braod shoulder is your fear" seems to ring loud and clear.

    This is a very moving write.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    It was a good poem. A bit repetitive for my taste, but I like the emotions that were present. The flow was good and thankfully you use punctuation. Keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very unique and interesting poem. It is emotional and you created superb atmosphere with a just few words. Short but powerful piece. It deserves 5/5

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