Very unique and interesting poem. It is emotional and you created superb atmosphere with a just few words. Short but powerful piece. It deserves 5/5

It was a good poem. A bit repetitive for my taste, but I like the emotions that were present. The flow was good and thankfully you use punctuation. Keep up the great work!

The sweet whispers that are told to us seem to enlighten the heart despite the fears.

The part state "Upon braod shoulder is your fear" seems to ring loud and clear.

This is a very moving write.

--Sher

Unique style. The 'only s' and 'lonely s' and 'you s' in the 1st stanza make it a little bouncy to read but also add a certain charm. it's a very sweet and sad peom.

I love this poem a lot, because of
how you write, but also because this
poem reminds me of a recent loss I
have experienced. I enjoyed, it a lot.
I give this a 5/5!!