I really loved this...it reminds of my life with my now ex. It made me tear up. Please keep writing and I will keep reading....5/5

OMG Kelvin, Im wordless to praise you and your beautiful work. Its simply superb. 100/100 for sure :)

Loved your poem
Tc
Fsams

Amazing poetry!
Youre really talented.
keep it up and take care
-Lisa

Another wow from me there!!!

This is simply amazing. I love it.

Keep it up mayne. :)

Jadee- is rad.

This is really beautiful with a sad ending. Love sometimes doenst work out the way we'd like, you wrote it well. 5/5, Em