I realy enjoyed while reading this poem .
you put here strong emotions and the feelings you have for someone
my favourite stanza :

I know your dreams, I know your cries
each breath I have memorized

take care 5/5

Very well done. I enjoyed this piece, it's something I can semi-relate to, not at this moment but whom I'm with has been like that. Great work, 5/5

Hey Tara,

Dit is echt een goed gedicht :D

Zeker netjes. Elk woord heeft zijn waarde.
Ik geef je zeker een dikke 5 :D

Spreek je snel ;-)

Well done Tara well done.... very emotional piece.

This is a nice poem again, and you are saying the facts there, u cant give more than whats you have, i know its so bad when you give all your heart to some andhe dont return it to you so your poem rings a bell in my heart something i ever experiance. Nice one.

OMG, wow this was beautiful and unexpected. I really loved it, the flow was amazing! =]

Omg I love this one
I have been in that situation b4