The Reason I'm Still Alive

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Aug 28, 2007


Hate me if you want to
Love me if you dare
But if you're going to love me
You better truly care

My heart is not a plaything
My emotion's aren't toys
But it seems that playing with them
Brings guys great joy

But that no longer matters
I've found the love of my life
He's everything I've ever wanted
He makes everything right

My heart's no longer broken
He stitched it back together
He wipes away my tears
And guards me of my fears
No matter what the weather

He won't break my heart
He'll hold it clsoe inside
I'm truly in love with this boy
He's the reason I'm still alive

-Copyright-AmberPalmer

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  • 17 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Beautiful piece. Truly excellent poetry.
    5/5

    [tragic]

  • 17 years ago

    by Melinda

    WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD. SO TRUE. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I really liked the second stanza, even though, to me, the flow was a little off. I just liked the concept of it. Overall this seems to me as a very heartfelt love poem and it's beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    This is so nice. Asside from the typo in the last sentence of the last stanza I think it is excellent.

    It is always nice to find that special someone who makes our lives complete.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I loved this peice. You could feel the past hurt disolving, as "His" love repair's you heart. I can truly relate.

    *But that no longer matters
    I've found the love of my life
    He's everything I've ever wanted
    He makes everything right*

    ^This stanza really got me, It's exactly how I feel about my boyfriend. I don't know what I would do if I lost him. I'd probably fall back into the pain of the past..

    *He won't break my heart
    He'll hold it clsoe inside
    I'm truly in love with this boy
    He's the reason I'm still alive*

    ^I really love how you ended this, Amazing.
    A very good closing stanza.

    Keep it up.
    5/5 Elly. You deserve It:)

    P.S I'd really like to show this too my boyfriend. If you don't mind. Send me Pm if it's ok or not:)

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