Comments : Ready to scream

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Ok..this one is a damn moving piece..
    esp. these lines

    "..I hurt
    I bleed
    But you dont even notice
    Im ready to scream
    I cant breathe
    Panic washes over me
    And its all that you dont see
    Cuz you dont wanna see.."

    i really felt it.. very relatable stuff. .
    its just amazing how you fold in and let out..
    you're a really amazing writer..

    oh n u dont have to thnk me fr commenting,, i really love your poems .. becoz i guess they're the ones i can relate to the most.. so i really like reading them..just do me a favour and dont ever stop writing.. :P

    take care,

    ~Wake~