Satanic bride

by NyellMoonlight   Aug 28, 2007


Evanescent obscurity and shadowed passion inside
amongst timid sighs hand in hand with Devils bride
severe thoughts frigidly crystallize gashes
with medley of harmoniously broken stars.

Veiled with scarlet velvet, singing decease's choir,
acrid faceless voices chanting with grotesque awe,
pale melodies of satanic neon lights exposing
lambent, frail mesh of Lady Death's wings.

Cradle of soul's bending over ancient remains
tip-toeing through graveyards of tainted lust
cryptic voices decode lifeless riddles
friable temptations are burning down bloody walls

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jstuckie

    W0W THiS iS G00D
    Y0U WRiTE VERY WELL
    ;]
    -MiCHELLE
    {5/5}
    *(C0MMENT BACK)*

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This is a really dark poem.Love the imagery that you have potrayed here.You did a very good job for this.
    Take care

  • Good job, great poem with strong wording and excellent atmosphere. Well done!5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Incredible poem. Atmosphere is very powerful and imagery is great. Ending is very effective, my favorite stanza is second but whole piece is fantastic. Unique and truly amazing. Just one word can describe this poem-WOW-!