Keekee! its beautiflul!!!

Wow. i loved this, it was very deep, and it had so much emotions. it was beautifully written. 5/5

I think this is my favorite part because i relate to the feeling so well...i know how it feels to be apart from someone and want to be in their arms so badly...good job on the little story series..keep it up.

Ooo. I definantly like this part. The emotion seemed so understandable. Excellent job : ]

This must be a dream what more could u ask for? are they going out now or no?

This poem has great rhythm and powerful atmosphere. It is original and very emotional. I enjoyed reading it, I will read 1,2,3, and fourth part of your love series later. This one deserves 5/5

This poem was great & very meaningful..

It was very inspirational i really enjoyed it. there was good flow & your wording was wonderful..

Keep it up Keenen your an inspiration!

*Hunny*