Did You Know It`s Impossible to Breathe? [Rispetto]

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Aug 29, 2007


The calendar is marked from the day that you decided to leave,
August third, just a week before our twenty-second anniversary;
And I`m looking for a sign of hope to save my heart on my sleeve,
But without you here, there is no chance in Hell left for me.

I count the golden stars to try to occupy my drunken mind,
But the only thing from all this that I have come to find;
Is that the threads bearing my heart are now just too complicated to weave,
Because since we fell apart - did you know it`s impossible to breathe?

-Jenna Elphick
August 28, 2007

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A Rispetto, an Italian form of poetry, is a complete poem of two rhyme quatrains with strict meter. The meter is usually iambic tetrameter with a rhyme scheme of abab ccdd.

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  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was good, it didn't flow very well but i loved the title, it totally caught me and i think it was really important to the poem. 5/5
    gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    O.O Whoa. This little poem was so powerful.. Almost knocked me off my seat! It was amazing. This style is great and worked really well with this poem dear. The title was beautiful and really drew me in. I just got some inspiration for some of my poems... But you could always inspire me... Did I ever tell you that?
    Okay, if you ever doubt your talent ((and I will slap you if you do)) just look here or any of the other 443 poems. I shall marry your talent, kai? ;)

    5.5 of course!

    loveeeeee yeeeeewwww <33