O.O Whoa. This little poem was so powerful.. Almost knocked me off my seat! It was amazing. This style is great and worked really well with this poem dear. The title was beautiful and really drew me in. I just got some inspiration for some of my poems... But you could always inspire me... Did I ever tell you that?
Okay, if you ever doubt your talent ((and I will slap you if you do)) just look here or any of the other 443 poems. I shall marry your talent, kai? ;)

5.5 of course!

loveeeeee yeeeeewwww <33

This was good, it didn't flow very well but i loved the title, it totally caught me and i think it was really important to the poem. 5/5
gabriella