Guilty?

by Christina Yap   Aug 29, 2007


I considered my innocence a blessing

A beautiful blessing.

A white dove.

I carried it everywhere,

Never letting go,

Holding on even tighter when I felt it could be stolen

But he

He was amazing

He was different

I wanted to show my appreciation

I wanted to present him with something

But

I had nothing to offer

Nothing but my white dove

I felt he deserved it

I gave it to him

And it Scarred me forever

But it was OK

Because it was for him

Days,

Weeks,

Months,

I never thought I would regret it

One statement said

Everything changed

Day turned to night

White turned black

The living died

My dove died

He killed it

And blamed me

He said

"Had you not said what you said,

Things wouldn't be this way."

I spoke my mind

Said how I felt

For I never hold back

And for that

My dove died

Why?

I said I felt i was doing wrong to others

But it wasn't intentionally

And he took it as though I said

I was doing wrong on purpose

Your Honor I do not understand

The first allows me freedom of speech

I swear on the Bible

To testify the truth

And nothing but the truth

And that's all I've given you

I did not kill my dove.

I loved my dove

It was precious

I gave it to another who I knew very well would care for it as much as I would

And now my dove is dead

Does that make me guilty?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I didn't really like how you spaced out the lines in this poem, it's very distracting. Overall, this piece was very unique and I loved the srtory to it. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "My dove died."

    ^^Such simple words, and yet the imagery and emotions they create are overwhelming...my favourite line of the whole piece.

    Again, I noticed alot of fillers which kind of distracted me, but other than that, this was perfect.

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    I love how you wrote it, the style just work's with this peice.
    It was long, But reading it- I didn't feel like it dragged on.
    Awesome job:D
    It seemed to flow well,
    and If nothing else it was enjoyable.

    Well done,
    Elly. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by StormyStar

    This is ahmazing.. i love it.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    This was very long with the way you set it out, but it was soo good.

    Wow. i loved this whole piece. i loved the concept of it, the words you use. it was a delight to read this. great work 5/5

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