Vulnerable

Sad, but very romantic. your feelings are so true..keep it uo^^

This is a gorgeous poem....It was truly a deep felt read if that makes any sence lol....all in all you did a great job writing this i love the emotion coming out of this poem and it was very unique nothing i havent read before...and the message also stood out...everyone becomes valnerable at the touch of love or so they say...i exspecially liked this part
"Salted tears of puzzled feelings,
And jumbled thoughts of pain
Were kissed away like water drops
On foggy window panes."
Definetly a Beautiful way of exspressing such emotion...anyways i better stop here or my comments gonna turn into a story book i definetly give this a 5/5!!!:)

Oh Sarah, its breathtakingly sad, I don't know how else to say it.... touching and heartfelt.

I haven't read anything like this in a while, I effin loved this!! Lol. Idk what to say, honestly. Beautiful, heartfelt write. 5/5.

Liz =]

Change 'he' to 'she', and I could've written the same thing...Haha...

Happens to all of us, but let's keep trusting shall we...