AishA,
wheN therE iS a gooD poeM, therE iS someonE tO reAd, afteR readinG, therE iS onE tO commenT, afteR commentinG, therE iS onE tO enjoY thE tastE oF itS readinG. thE persoN whO enjoyeD thiS poeM noW iS onlY mE (luzN) witH pleasurE and witH a greaT interesT..... beleivE mE

luzaN

Its more or less like a mssage than a poem
loved its feeling
Nice write
keep it up friend
and try rhyming and framing it too
4/5
take care,
Rohan