Wow...I read this and my whole life started flashing before my eyes, this is exactly what Im going through right now...amazing poem and beautifully written!=]

Brooke<3

Wow i know what this poem means nice one 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Only suggestion is to work on the flow. And there was one line where the rhyme seemed forced. It was line #10. The message of this poem is what's good. It's very easy to relate to, and that makes a reader want to finish the piece, to keep reading. So I encourage you to constantly keep pulling your emotions from the heart and putting them into your pieces, as it's so obvious you do.
Charisma*