Very unique and interesting poem. First stanza is my favorite and you created excellent atmosphere. Topic is very original, you also expressed emotions superbly. Very effective and powerful piece.
Well done! It deserves 5/5

Damn, how do you come up with them.... this write is superb, the words.... omg.... I don't know what to say, I'm speechless.... powerful, damn powerful!!

WOW - brilliant!!! I really liked this one. Such a tale of bitterness and the survival mechanism that becomes us all when we reach the bitter part of our lives before we accept the truth. Lovely piece Melissa.

Mo

I KNEW you were a poet.