Im far from fine

by Finalgravedigger   Aug 29, 2007


I'm far from fine

Whats wrong with me
Am I in deep sleep?
I must be with this angel in front of me.

And now look at me
with feet off solid ground
I must weigh less than a pound.

I look at you
Im paralyzed too
Ive gone insane
loving this pain.

You walk
then you talk
your voice brings my spirit up.

So weak
just cant think
lost in thoughts
I say so what.

You touch my face
I can feel all your grace
my heart starts to race.

Your lips reach for mine
I'm far from fine
I'm out of my mind.

Your kiss
brings so much bliss
melts me down
but theres no frown.

Im broken
but I dont wanna be fixed
all I wanna do
is be with you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    Realy love this poem its so true and jus describes how you feel when your in real love lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    U really enjoyed this poem, it's all around good.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    That is so beautiful and it reminds me of my love for a certain guy = D beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Great poem!
    I could tell it came from the heart
    your fantastic
    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by emily

    I really like this poem, you are so good at rhyming words. i can understand where your coming from. also if i was you, i would keep the person your writing about close to you coz they seem to make your life better. keeps up the good work :).
    emily x