Wow, i really liked this poem i cant truely relate to this :D
Cassey

It seems to me that person makes things better in your life. This write is heartfelt and loving, well done.

This is a beautiful poem you have written. I can certainly relate which is why I love it, 5/5

I love this poem and know exactly what you mean..means alot xoxox 5/5

I really like it! It is very good.

I like it, it is very original and interesting. You created great atmosphere but I don't like the last two lines, they are to typical. I like the form of this piece, it is unique and you wrote it excellently.
Well done! 5/5

Very nice and thank u for makin a comment bout my poems as well keep up da good work. 5/5

Ewwww I likie.... I just took the one that leaves me llike this to work and now... I am far from fine!

You wrote this so tenderly.

--Sher

I have to agree with DarkSpirit, the last too lines are sorta cliche but other than that, i loved it =]

It's alright. The structure is good. A little bit too focused on rhyme for my taste.

Wow.. i love it.. once again.. i know how taht feels.. i truly know this feeling.. good job.. keep it up.. one of my favorites.. i get the emotion in this poem.. its great.. i love it
-Tylor

This is such a nice piece. Feelings of young love are the best ones. Treasure all of them you can.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Ahhhh young love....it's great....

Thank you for my first comment on Spiked.

Take care
Yvonne

So sweet =)
Keep loving**

Very impressive and entrancing!..your doing pretty darn good yourself my fwen...keep it up I would love to come and read more of yours...take care now...=)...

Your poem is realli good thank you for the comment on mine:)
xx

HEY I LIKE THIS POEM AND THANKS 4 THE COMMENT ON MY POEM!!!!!

Your poems are so goood !
this ones great tooo =]

xo.louii

This was cute. Your flow was kinda spuratic but other than that I enjoyed it. Your emotion was pure and sweet. Great job!
5/5

Amber....

I really like this poem, you are so good at rhyming words. i can understand where your coming from. also if i was you, i would keep the person your writing about close to you coz they seem to make your life better. keeps up the good work :).
emily x