Comments : The Fall of Icarus

  • 17 years ago

    by FreeTigerMouse

    Hello,
    I like this poem, because you so nicely and aptly describe his story, destiny.

    I like your style.

    Greetings to Bulgaria!

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Excellently written piece, from the beginning to the end. I like the mythological topic. Whole poem contains great great and vivid imagery, and you did good job with rhymes.
    The ending stanza makes great conclusion to the whole poem, especially two latest line.
    Keep writing!
    5/5 from me